diff --git a/blog/posts/ios-vs-android.md b/blog/posts/ios-vs-android.md
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--- a/blog/posts/ios-vs-android.md
+++ b/blog/posts/ios-vs-android.md
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ Support for installing alternate operating systems isn't just important for user
 
 In order to install any apps or use many features on iOS, you need an [Apple Account](https://account.apple.com). Apple Accounts ask for your real name and require a phone number during account creation, on top of tying your app and other purchases to an account. While iOS is known to be privacy-friendly, Apple's [privacy policy](https://www.apple.com/legal/privacy/en-ww) leaves a lot to be desired.
 
-iOS doesn't allow you to unlock the bootloader to install another operating system. While [jailbreaking](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IOS_jailbreaking) is possible, it requires exploiting your device and ultimately your security will be much worse.
+iOS doesn't allow you to unlock the bootloader to install another OS. While [jailbreaking](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IOS_jailbreaking) is possible, it requires exploiting your device and ultimately undermining your device's security.
 
 iOS should allow for fully unlocking and relocking the bootloader for alternate operating systems so that a version of iOS without any user data being sent to Apple can be installed.