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-Privacy isn't just about the tools. It also isn't just about the laws. And it isn't just about the practices either. It's about all of that. To move our society in a place where everyone benefits from privacy by default, we must consider technologies, laws, and culture altogether.
+Privacy isn't just about the tools, the laws, or the practices of any individual or organization. It's about *all* of that. To move our society in a place where everyone benefits from privacy by default, we must consider technologies, laws, and culture holistically.
 
 Here's how to get better at **considering the whole landscape**:
 
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 - [**Chat Control**](https://www.privacyguides.org/articles/2025/09/08/chat-control-must-be-stopped/) proposals have been an ongoing issue since 2021.
 
-- [**Age Verification**](https://www.privacyguides.org/articles/2025/05/06/age-verification-wants-your-face/) regulations and proposals are growing around the world at an exponential rate.
+- [**Age Verification**](https://www.privacyguides.org/articles/2025/05/06/age-verification-wants-your-face/) regulations and proposals are growing around the world at a terrifying rate.
 
 - [**Data Brokers**](../../data-broker-removals.md) are incessantly exploiting our data due to weak regulations.