diff --git a/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-protect-your-allies.md b/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-protect-your-allies.md
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@@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Here's what you can do to safeguard the data of your privacy comrades:
 
 ## Where we might collect and share the data of others
 
-There are many ways we might collect the data of others in our daily advocacy, sometimes without even realizing it fully.
+There are many ways we might collect the data of others in the course of our advocacy, sometimes without even realizing it.
 
-It's important to develop an awareness of the data we collect and share ourselves, and protect the data of others with the greatest care. Not only is this critical for [integrity](tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md), but it's also fundamental to build and keep the trust of our allies. Which in return is essential to build and grow our movement.
+It's important to develop an awareness of the data we collect and share ourselves, and protect the data of others with the greatest care. Not only is this critical for [integrity](tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md), but it's also fundamental to build and keep the trust of our allies. This in return is essential to build and grow our movement.
 
 Here are a some examples of other people's data we might collect or share in the context of our privacy advocacy work, whether intentionally or inadvertently:
 
@@ -101,6 +101,6 @@ Regardless of the data we have to collect, we should always make sure to:
 
 ## More resources
 
-- [Data is a toxic asset (Bruce Schneier blog)](https://www.schneier.com/blog/archives/2016/03/data_is_a_toxic.html)
+- [Data is a toxic asset (*Bruce Schneier*)](https://www.schneier.com/blog/archives/2016/03/data_is_a_toxic.html)
 
-- [The importance of protecting the data of others (Privacy Guides)](https://www.privacyguides.org/articles/2025/03/10/the-privacy-of-others/)
+- [The importance of protecting the data of others (*Privacy Guides*)](https://www.privacyguides.org/articles/2025/03/10/the-privacy-of-others/)
diff --git a/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md b/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md
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--- a/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md
+++ b/docs/activism/toolbox/tip-stay-true-to-your-principles.md
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Here are a few examples of practices and good habits you might want to adopt:
 
 - [x] Reject any offers for partnership or sponsorship from third-parties that have not been properly vetted for being trustworthy and sharing your privacy values, or who might only have profit and advertising in mind.
 
-- [x] Keep your promises. As a privacy advocate, group, or organization, your reputation is the most valuable thing you have. ==If people cannot trust your integrity, they will not trust any of your advices either.== If you promise to never accept sponsorship from certain Big Tech, then make sure you are ready to hold this promise. If you promise to never accept venture-capital money for your privacy-preserving app, then keep your word and be ready to reject even attractive offers.
+- [x] Keep your promises. As a privacy advocate, group, or organization, your reputation is the most valuable thing you have. ==If people cannot trust your integrity, they will not trust any of your advice either.== If you promise to never accept sponsorship from certain Big Tech companies, then make sure you are ready to hold this promise. If you promise to never accept venture-capital money for your privacy-preserving app, then keep your word and be ready to reject even attractive offers.
 
 ## Integrity is essential to build our movement